An Astro-Chromatologist Scorned
Great way to weave storytelling into filosophical ideas. Loved the way you presented the space in the first paragraph,
I adored the way this short story was written. I was not expecting that ending though. Great work!
Or to really bring the point home u could have mick jagger volume come up singing paint it black as the credit roll?
Nice story but bleak. Can we out harry Nillson’s “puppy song” in there to cheer things up. It will make my cobalt infusion go down easier.
Great way to weave storytelling into filosophical ideas. Loved the way you presented the space in the first paragraph,
I adored the way this short story was written. I was not expecting that ending though. Great work!
Or to really bring the point home u could have mick jagger volume come up singing paint it black as the credit roll?
Nice story but bleak. Can we out harry Nillson’s “puppy song” in there to cheer things up. It will make my cobalt infusion go down easier.